Apr. 28th, 2013

lmeighmy: Found Photo. I Do NOT hold the copyright and am only using it for entertainment purposes. (Typewriter)
I haven't done any writing since Thursday. I've done a bit of brainstorming, though. And there were some tricky things about Kalaghata's storyline that I just didn't know.

First of all, I realized I needed to figure out a way that these immortals could die, some kind of vulnerability. I needed a situation that would test Kalaghata in a huge way, and through finding this vulnerability, I did that.

I also created a new element, a new substance, that causes this vulnerability. It was originally used to imprison their enemies, but it can be used against them, as well. It makes them weak to the point where wounds or poison can kill them. Not a pleasant thing, but necessary to the overall storyline.

Other than that, I worked out some tricky stuff in Kalaghata's timeline--most notably, the crisis, in which he faces a "secondary antagonist." In other words, he has a difficult encounter with a lesser enemy. Soon after this, he'll have the big showdown with the main antagonist. I have yet to figure out if he defeats this enemy in this story or whether he will face this enemy again in a later story. This is one thing I have to work out before I go back and plan the parts of the story that lead up to the crisis and the climax.

And he has a very good chance of losing two people who are very close to him, which is sad, but life will go on for him, and he'll be richer for it. In spite of the fact that it doesn't sound like it. ;)

I've also got the beginning of the "Big Picture" story--the catalyst to the series--all set. I still need to flesh out the rest of it, but the beginning is the most important part at the moment, especially since Kal's story happens first.

I wanted to focus on something in his present and have something from his past, maybe two things, parallel it, so there will be flashbacks (made obvious when I write them in italics), but they will be minimal compared to his modern story.

I also somehow figured out a way to add vampires to the story, but they will be minimal. I don't want to write vampire fiction, per se, but I don't have a problem with adding a vampire or two, especially since there was at least one character who's story would change too drastically if I made him a regular Immortal. He'll have his own story at some point.

Someone recently asked me if this was going to be anything like 50 Shades of Grey, a story I never, ever plan on reading, let alone imitating. I will not be writing steamy sex scenes. If I'd be embarrassed to read it out loud, then I won't write it. :P That said, I told her it's kind of like a cross between Highlander and Stargate with a bit of Supernatural mixed in. All in all, I consider it a dark fantasy.

~L

lmeighmy: Found Photo. I Do NOT hold the copyright and am only using it for entertainment purposes. (Kunal Khemu)
Some of you might remember my Immortal Watchdogs character, Kalaghata. This short takes place when he was a teen and still coming into his powers. He is an immortal, and he has never (yet) met anyone like himself. He has no mentor, no one to tell him what to expect or to teach him how to control his abilities.

Very early in his life, he suffered unimaginable cruelty, but I haven't been explicit here (don't know that I ever will be, to be honest). In this short, he meets a man, a Greek "traveler," who will have a profound impact on his young life.

Enjoy!

~L

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